After I finish the first part of this novel, it is said that the new father appeared. And from that time David's problem has come as well. His mother fells in love with that guy. But we can see that David dose not like him. So does his new father.
After a talk with the new father, David hold the view strongly that he is not a good guy to deal with. So the trouble has come.
This is the first part, I think it is a good start for this novel. Maybe, next time I can read another parts.
OK, that's ok now.
Please write from the perspective of your main character, David Copperfield. Also, don't be afraid to provide a little more detail. This post is just a little bit short. Thank you!
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